thats pretty nifty, correct me if im wrong but your kinda explaining how an accident of some sort has happened and people are dieing which is causeing a grid lock ...while the response team is trying to save lives all people can think about is thier own agenda's that they believe are more important, such as their meeting with the *boss*. Makes you think how detached from human emotions and the horror and sadness of death if the person isn't close to you has become...anyways ry great short poem i think you have earned yourself a fav from me

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lol i forgot to add the part about how its in your head to lol

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Well Dave, thanks for the fave (I love rhyme) And im glad you pulled something out of my poem that was completly opposite form what I planned to portray. I love when that happens. My poems tend to reflect two sides of my persona (The gemini in me). I wrote this poem as a mean sof expressing the frustration in my mind with all the work im dealing with, life and so on. Mostly with school though. I have so much going on right now in my head that my head jsut feels crammed to the point that nothing is moving around anymore, hence the gridlock. The paramedic team is meant to represent those people who try to unclutter the jam in my life, but they fail to succeed. both ways, I think your interpretation is very valid and Im glad it spoke to you. Thanks for the comments.

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